Remember that copy is just one part of the sales funnel; and although I don't think it's great (on either site), that's probably not your only problem.
I think the issue here, is that you are trying to sell marketing products, without really knowing too much about marketing yourself; and for that reason you've got sweet FA when it comes to credibility.
Also, you've obviously just got MRR to a bunch of products that will have already been sold 10 times over by much bigger marketer's than thou. So you'll find your prospects have already bought, or passed on a few of the ones you are offering.
I think £1,000 for a copywriter was a waste of money; but not necessarily because the copy is crap, but because you really aren't driving a hungry market to your pages.
My opinion of course; but I don't think I'm wrong...
Colm
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