[JBinder]

Hi Sarah

Just a few notes.

1. There is far too much text and it would be a good idea to make everything short and sweet, and not too flowery.

2. "Do you have work that needs to be written? Do you have too much to do and not enough time to do it in? Do you have many articles that need writing quickly or just a small editing job to be done? If you have any kind of copywriting work that needs doing at any size or level you have come to the right place" - THIS NEEDS TO BE SHORT AND TO THE POINT AND STAND OUT AS THESE ARE THE SERVICES YOU ARE OFFERING.

3. "At FCS we can transform your website or your business with great sales writing and content writing. We can make your lagging business into a highly successful one just by using words" - I WOULDN'T USE THE WORD LAGGING AS YOU NEED TO BE POSITIVE ABOUT A COMPANY - I.E SAY SOMETHING LIKE "IMPROVING YOUR COMPANY'S PROFILE".

4. Your Menus need to stand out more, your services (as mentioned in 1) and most importantly you need to have a logo and main title that makes an impact. It just looks a little bland.

Keep at it, I know you can do it and make it look fantastic, just needs a few tweaks. The simple and clean idea is good though. If you would like me do design your logo for you, please let me know.

It'll look fab....

Julie