Tips needed - copy for 'unable to contact' email... - Freelance UK Forums

bad_doggy · 05-15-2009, 10:37 AM

Morning folks

I've been writing some sales emails lately, which have been sent to addresses on a new database we've built.

They've been going pretty good, on the whole. The most recent one I did was a follow-up email to a sales phone call, but now I need to write one to be sent to the list of contacts that the sales guys have been unable to reach by phone.

I know this is fairly vague, but I'm looking for a few ideas for structure. I want to keep it short and snappy, but any suggestions on how I can approach it without sounding like we're desperately plumbing the depths for business (times are hard, after all)?

BD

johnthecoach · 05-15-2009, 12:45 PM

AIDA : The advertising formula that always works! | Copywriting.com

05-15-2009, 10:37 AM	#1 (permalink)
bad_doggy New Poster Join Date: May 2008 Posts: 5	Tips needed - copy for 'unable to contact' email... Morning folks I've been writing some sales emails lately, which have been sent to addresses on a new database we've built. They've been going pretty good, on the whole. The most recent one I did was a follow-up email to a sales phone call, but now I need to write one to be sent to the list of contacts that the sales guys have been unable to reach by phone. I know this is fairly vague, but I'm looking for a few ideas for structure. I want to keep it short and snappy, but any suggestions on how I can approach it without sounding like we're desperately plumbing the depths for business (times are hard, after all)? BD

05-15-2009, 12:45 PM	#2 (permalink)
johnthecoach Regular Poster Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: North Wales/Shropshire; Skype: FreelanceCoach Posts: 29	Here you go...never fails. AIDA : The advertising formula that always works! \| Copywriting.com

Thread Tools
Show Printable Version Email this Page
Display Modes
Linear Mode Switch to Hybrid Mode Switch to Threaded Mode