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stephen doyle ccuk · 09-25-2007, 09:43 PM

all offers have now completed

hellosmithy · 09-26-2007, 01:07 PM

You might want to check some of the punctuation on your site.

stephen doyle ccuk · 09-26-2007, 02:58 PM

like give us a clue,

everything has been checked.

some words are capitalised for enhancement.

glad you took the time to visit though

hellosmithy · 10-23-2007, 04:14 PM

Looks like you've updated the site - at a quick glance good job, the punctuation is much better

Nice to see some capital letters and full stops!

hellosmithy · 10-23-2007, 04:22 PM

Although having said that, you don't seem to be such a huge fan of capitalising / punctuating in your forum posts. I know it's just a forum post, but as a copywriter I would have thought you might want to maintain a high quality on everything a potential client might read.

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Originally Posted by stephen doyle ccuk

ok potential prospects / customers for life!

heres an offer you cannot refuse.

i am building a portfolio in sales copy i am looking for some projects that will enhance your business and my portfolio.

If I were a potential client this wouldn't fill me with confidence. Maybe I'm just being a pedant...

theovonh · 10-24-2007, 12:57 AM

That's an interesting point.

How proffesional should we be?

Is it fair to say that anytime you post with your business name you should be as proffesional as possible so as to have the highest quality of web presence? Or is that nit-picking?

hellosmithy · 10-29-2007, 02:52 AM

I guess it depends on context, but certainly I think if you're using a forum to attract new clients, as Stephen is doing, then you'd want to be pretty perfectionist.

colmodwyer · 10-30-2007, 05:39 AM

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If I were a potential client this wouldn't fill me with confidence. Maybe I'm just being a pedant...

Not at all; you are quite right to bring this up.

Assuming most clients won't know too much about what makes good copy; one of the few things they will know about, and be able to critique, is spelling and grammar.

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Killer Copy Writing Super Human Sales Training Direct Market

*Copywriting

Colm

debugyeh · 11-12-2007, 01:57 PM

I do not recommend Steven Doyle, and I am still waiting for my £100 Refund... from 3 weeks ago. A totally unreliable copywritter.

Kind Regards

Alan Hamlyn

Sunflower · 11-12-2007, 05:14 PM

Have followed this thread over the past few weeks - would you be willing to share with the group as to why you seek a refund?

09-25-2007, 09:43 PM	#1 (permalink)
stephen doyle ccuk Regular Poster Join Date: Aug 2007 Posts: 19	Copy Writing offer you cannot refuse all offers have now completed Last edited by stephen doyle ccuk; 11-20-2007 at 04:30 PM. Reason: offer changed

09-26-2007, 02:58 PM	#3 (permalink)
stephen doyle ccuk Regular Poster Join Date: Aug 2007 Posts: 19	punctuation like give us a clue, everything has been checked. some words are capitalised for enhancement. glad you took the time to visit though Last edited by stephen doyle ccuk; 11-20-2007 at 04:37 PM.

10-23-2007, 04:14 PM	#4 (permalink)
hellosmithy Super Poster Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Shanghai Posts: 94	Looks like you've updated the site - at a quick glance good job, the punctuation is much better Nice to see some capital letters and full stops! Last edited by hellosmithy; 10-23-2007 at 04:16 PM.

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debugyeh New Poster Join Date: Oct 2007 Posts: 4	Do not Deal With Steven Doyle I do not recommend Steven Doyle, and I am still waiting for my £100 Refund... from 3 weeks ago. A totally unreliable copywritter. Kind Regards Alan Hamlyn

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09-26-2007, 01:07 PM	#2 (permalink)
hellosmithy Super Poster Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Shanghai Posts: 94	You might want to check some of the punctuation on your site.

10-24-2007, 12:57 AM	#6 (permalink)
theovonh New Poster Join Date: Oct 2007 Posts: 7	That's an interesting point. How proffesional should we be? Is it fair to say that anytime you post with your business name you should be as proffesional as possible so as to have the highest quality of web presence? Or is that nit-picking?

10-29-2007, 02:52 AM	#7 (permalink)
hellosmithy Super Poster Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Shanghai Posts: 94	I guess it depends on context, but certainly I think if you're using a forum to attract new clients, as Stephen is doing, then you'd want to be pretty perfectionist.

11-12-2007, 05:14 PM	#10 (permalink)
Sunflower Regular Poster Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Sheffield Posts: 27	Have followed this thread over the past few weeks - would you be willing to share with the group as to why you seek a refund?