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Tips needed - copy for 'unable to contact' email...

Discussion in 'Copywriting Forum' started by bad_doggy, May 15, 2009.

  1. bad_doggy

    bad_doggy New Member

    Morning folks

    I've been writing some sales emails lately, which have been sent to addresses on a new database we've built.

    They've been going pretty good, on the whole. The most recent one I did was a follow-up email to a sales phone call, but now I need to write one to be sent to the list of contacts that the sales guys have been unable to reach by phone.

    I know this is fairly vague, but I'm looking for a few ideas for structure. I want to keep it short and snappy, but any suggestions on how I can approach it without sounding like we're desperately plumbing the depths for business (times are hard, after all)?

  2. johnthecoach

    johnthecoach New Member

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