Uk Startup - Website feedback would be appreciated

Hi guys,

Just starting up a freelance 1 man web agency, Marconi Media. I am actually from Romania (hungarian nationality), have a business in .ro and starting up in the UK. Anyways, any feedback would be appreciated on:

Web design in Avon, Bristol, Somerset, Cornwall, Devon, South Wales, South West UK - E-Commerce Website design, Content management system Websites - CMS, Web Site Optimization - SEO

Thanks a lot,
Cheers!

 

Copywriting needs work. "Hello Welcome to Our New Website - We HopeYou Like It" does not convey the right message.

Look at my homepage

2Wards Systems – Effective Website Design and Web Presence Solutions

Much different but a better focus on what the site is for.