Hi there, I'm new to this forum. I'm currently doing a copywriting course, and as part of the coursework, I was asked to write headlines for an adult newspaper. I've just received feedback on my assignment, and I'm wondering if someone would mind looking at that for me and letting me know if you think the comments are fair. I'm really disappointed with my mark. I signed up for a copywriting course, not a journalism course, so I'm not sure why I was asked to write newspaper headlines in the first place. Hope to hear from you soon!